Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Warning Against Raw Milk

The Food and Drug Administration (FDA) are warning people not to drink raw milk. Drinking raw milk can contain damaging bacteria including salmonella, E. Coli and listeria. 1,624 people have reported being sick, 187 have been sent to the hospital while two have died from drinking raw milk from the year 1998 to 2008.

Star Tribune Online

http://www.startribune.com/lifestyle/health/89275537.html?elr=KArks7PYDiaK7DUqEiaDUiD3aPc:_Yyc:aULPQL7PQLanchO7DiUr

1 comment:

  1. Grade: 9/10
    • Should be "is" not "are" in the first sentence. The FDA is a single entity.
    • Spell out numbers at the start of sentences (except years and addresses).

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